Wednesday, April 04, 2007

Night

Night ascends above the city
Light burns brightly, neon rainbows,
Sodium flares and coloured curtains
Milling masses swarm the streets
Flitting from place to place
Sampling civilizations nectar

5 comments:

Steve Isham said...

Do the masses sample 'civilizations nectar', or some glitzy/frothy by-products?

Annie Wicking said...

Wow, great works.

Annie

Russell CJ Duffy said...

i love london by night. best city in the world

Drizel said...

such an awesome one, I't takes life in the eye of the mind:)

Inconsequential said...

CJ - London evenings are great, but after ten(ish) it just gets grubby.

Annie/Loman - thankyou.

Etain - :)

Ish - I suspect nectar is wrong, but then even the 'elite' don't sample the nectar, just more expensive products, I couldn't think of anything else to put though, so...
if you have any ideas, feel free to offer an alternative, or better yet, take the piece away and rewrite it in your own way :)