Monday, June 11, 2007

Four more met

These words swarm in shoals

Twisting and darting dodging

Eluding the dredging mental net

.

An unfortunate few caught

Dragged out to flounder and flop

On minds stark decking

.

To be scraped and gutted

Scaled and prepared

For others delectation

.

I think

I may have

Over fished these waters

5 comments:

Pat Paulk said...

Know the feeling. Have pulled up more empty hooks than scaly, air gasping, flopping words. This ones a definite keeper!!

trinitystar said...

Hooked on getting those words out.
love your choice of words

To be scraped and gutted Scaled and prepared For others

aria said...

"I think
I may have
Over fished these waters"

poignant..

Jay said...

Greatly evocative -
the scaling part made me cringe.

Inside our hands, outside our hearts said...

How abstract and enticing. We see, we want, we capture, only to find that we have taken too much.

I like this ... makes me think.