Saturday, August 11, 2007

Hack

Back and forth
We roil and froth
Blood spraying
Hounds baying
Gripped tight
In mortal fight
And my friend
At the end

I will stand alone.

7 comments:

aria said...

'At the end
I will stand alone.'

That's the final irony.

Alok said...

everyone of us will stand alone and i guess that's a bitter truth we all realise but some how fail to accept and cling of to everything tht can just lend us a lend ..

well written

alok

Arthur Quiller Couch said...

Been reading 'Fight Club'?

Steve Isham said...

"I will help you if I can I will kill you if I must, I will kill you if I can, I will help you if I must." Is that the drift? Good to see you worded up again and in fine form. (I haven't been round the traps for a while.)

Pat Paulk said...

That is a fact. Powerful!!

Drizel said...

cool.....:)...whahahahah..teasing...whahahah....As always very graphic picture formed in my brain...:)loooovveeee it:)

Ruela said...

like... very... the last words...
:)