Wednesday, November 21, 2007

Loss

Leaden feet on wet sand
Drag me on
I know not why
Without you
There is no life
Worth living
Yet ‘cross wet sand
Leaden feet drag me on

4 comments:

etain_lavena said...

vivid image I got when I saw it dragged:)

Thanks for visiting my blog.....;)

cocaine jesus said...

evocative images. funny how both you and etain have written with a similar theme.

ish said...

This encapsulates so well that feeling. Contrast: How light the flight of feet winged by love and discovery.

aria said...

There is something positive and irrepressible despite the disappointment in those dragging feet.