Saturday, November 17, 2007

Raise - Lower

Cold cold steel
Warming fast

As release
And rapture
Mingle

Cold cold steel
Digging deep
Searching
Seeking

Not here
Not there

Try again
Again

Cool steel
Bites again

Rapture
Rupture
Release and flow
Flow

Body warm steel
Cooling
Cooling
Cold

2 comments:

cocaine jesus said...

what?
OK.
it worked.
i am here.

;)

seriously though, good.

Clockworkchris said...

That picture for Cocaine Jesus is seriously disturbing. WOW...anyway...a poem about suicide is how I took this. I own lots of cold steel, but I would never actually use it. It's just there. The repetition made this very intersting.