Patience
Gripped
Face white
Vision tunnelling
Cold sweat
As I sit and
Wait…
Face white
Vision tunnelling
Cold sweat
As I sit and
Wait…
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2 comments:
oh gosh and then the reader is just wondering what you're waiting for.... Excellent suspense
this poem made me want to pull out my hair the suspense--you know how to get the emotion from your reader!;)
Novel
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