Thursday, January 24, 2008

Patience

Gripped
Face white
Vision tunnelling
Cold sweat
As I sit and
Wait…

2 comments:

Crafty Green Poet said...

oh gosh and then the reader is just wondering what you're waiting for.... Excellent suspense

Novel Nymph said...

this poem made me want to pull out my hair the suspense--you know how to get the emotion from your reader!;)

Novel