Monday, March 05, 2007

Ug

Virus burnt tracks
Through grey matter
Hollows of non-functioning muscle
Habits and basic functions remain
Neither use nor ornament

4 comments:

miss magic said...

As usual, a terrific poem! :)

etain_lavena said...

Feels like that sinking mud....dont know what is it called.
But it sucks you in and leave you blind:)

Inconsequential said...

more like the dregs of flumanchoo, which still rages through the festering bilge that I use as a brain.
fevered writing can be fun, but needs editing when well again...

have a rabbit poem thing that I might put up soon, but unsure as to how much sense it makes, might need a re-write...was fever peaking cold sweats and shakes, when I walked to work, and it kinda evolved on the way.

Pod said...

i thought you meant cjd....oops!