Friday, September 14, 2007

Inclement

Crumpled
Folded legs






Gazing






Sweating pane
Forms torrents


Thousand yard stare
Unheeded races


Protracted
Wet
Afternoon

9 comments:

Annie Wicking and Loman Austen said...

what a wonderful view on life you have. Keep on writing.

Have you had any of your work published yet?

Annie

Inconsequential said...

No. Nothing published.
But then nothing submitted either.
Someone I respect very much has also suggested the publishing thing...

I doubt. I doubt the validity of these pieces. I doubt that anyone would want to read them. So, quite a hurdle to surmount really...

Though, thanks to the other, I'm considering.

Molly said...

Keep considering. Liked this one matey.

Molly said...

Go on...do it.

etain_lavena said...

can smell the wet afternoon as if I am there.....deep breathe:)
HUGZ In:)

etain_lavena said...

o and hello doubt, anyone would read and love your words, random stranger are reading....you better believe you are good enough in, your words are as always awesome;)

etain_lavena said...

you ok in?

cocaine jesus said...

go with molly. molly is right. bless her talented little socks.

aria said...

I felt like echoing what had already been said .. you really should consider publishing ..
All the best .. :)