Friday, September 14, 2007

Inclement

Crumpled
Folded legs






Gazing






Sweating pane
Forms torrents


Thousand yard stare
Unheeded races


Protracted
Wet
Afternoon

9 comments:

Annie Wicking said...

what a wonderful view on life you have. Keep on writing.

Have you had any of your work published yet?

Annie

Inconsequential said...

No. Nothing published.
But then nothing submitted either.
Someone I respect very much has also suggested the publishing thing...

I doubt. I doubt the validity of these pieces. I doubt that anyone would want to read them. So, quite a hurdle to surmount really...

Though, thanks to the other, I'm considering.

Anonymous said...

Keep considering. Liked this one matey.

Anonymous said...

Go on...do it.

Drizel said...

can smell the wet afternoon as if I am there.....deep breathe:)
HUGZ In:)

Drizel said...

o and hello doubt, anyone would read and love your words, random stranger are reading....you better believe you are good enough in, your words are as always awesome;)

Drizel said...

you ok in?

Russell CJ Duffy said...

go with molly. molly is right. bless her talented little socks.

aria said...

I felt like echoing what had already been said .. you really should consider publishing ..
All the best .. :)