Care
See him,
See him stumble along
All rags and bags and beer bottles
See him stoop
And grasp
A morsel found
Chocolate bar
From gritty ground
See him lift and furtively place
Morsel found into bearded face
And chew
See him chew and stare
At you; as you draw near
And fetid breath drifts on air
It dawns, not chocolate
But doggy doo…
See him stumble along
All rags and bags and beer bottles
See him stoop
And grasp
A morsel found
Chocolate bar
From gritty ground
See him lift and furtively place
Morsel found into bearded face
And chew
See him chew and stare
At you; as you draw near
And fetid breath drifts on air
It dawns, not chocolate
But doggy doo…
13 comments:
Oh yuk! Nice piece though.
Ackkk. What a foul piece - nicely done!
You caught me very off guard as well. Wonderful!
finally, someone who makes my take on "foul" seem almost nice. Well done.
Did he think it was a tootsie roll?
Marvelous twist and great use of the theme this week.
Ohhhhhhh Noooooooo - Foul - but cleverly done!
eeeewwwww... two ucky ones in a row!!!!!
very well done ... never saw it coming .. the chocolate bar would have been bad enough!!!!
only you could have written a piece like that and my love for chocolate and your artistry remain intact!;)
Novel
Now a question: which has more nutrients, I wonder?
That ending is truly great..
fouled up, have you?
Well done! I never expected that! Excuse me while I run to the bathroom!
Oh yuck!
oh that is very good... and i like your title... reminds me of that movie ... caddyshack... when he was cleaning the pool... and it was a candy bar...
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