Saturday, February 23, 2008


This coin
Of my passion
This issue - Spent

Highly priced
This passion spent
In torn dress
Broken nails

Issue spilt
On split skin
Red mixed white
Frothy pink

First date - last date
Always like this
Resisting kisses
Subdued by knife

Pink skin fading
Warm issue cooling
In passions blood
She's lain past sleep


aria said...

its at once direct yet subtle .. lovely ..

gautami tripathy said...

She lies past sleep..

It has made me think.

Susan Helene Gottfried said...

This is one I'm going to have to mull over. It can be taken so many ways!

paisley said...

the only thing she loves more than kissing them is killing them... well that definitely takes care of the disappointment phase doesn't it?????

very well written....

colleen said...

But it collect interest you know.

Shyam said...

wow, you're the master of understated horror!

tumblewords said...

So many layers, so many images - it's absolutely wonderful!!

Amarettogirl said...

I really enjoyed this...that dark twist that overlaps love, lust and violence...quickly and to the point!(Pun intended!) Thank you