Passion
Spent
This coin
Of my passion
This issue - Spent
Highly priced
This passion spent
In torn dress
Broken nails
Issue spilt
On split skin
Red mixed white
Frothy pink
First date - last date
Always like this
Resisting kisses
Subdued by knife
Pink skin fading
Warm issue cooling
In passions blood
She's lain past sleep
This coin
Of my passion
This issue - Spent
Highly priced
This passion spent
In torn dress
Broken nails
Issue spilt
On split skin
Red mixed white
Frothy pink
First date - last date
Always like this
Resisting kisses
Subdued by knife
Pink skin fading
Warm issue cooling
In passions blood
She's lain past sleep
8 comments:
its at once direct yet subtle .. lovely ..
She lies past sleep..
It has made me think.
This is one I'm going to have to mull over. It can be taken so many ways!
the only thing she loves more than kissing them is killing them... well that definitely takes care of the disappointment phase doesn't it?????
very well written....
But it collect interest you know.
wow, you're the master of understated horror!
So many layers, so many images - it's absolutely wonderful!!
I really enjoyed this...that dark twist that overlaps love, lust and violence...quickly and to the point!(Pun intended!) Thank you
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