Saturday, March 01, 2008

Travelling Time

Body diced
And left
In acid bath
A night’s work
Well done
Message sent -
Of delivered message
That hand…
That face peeled…
And transaction
Completed -
Time to travel…


aria said...

I had to read it 2-3 times..the first stanza is trademark 'you' . in spite of those intense emotions expressed .. every line seems to be suffused with a quiet, expectant hush .. and the last line.. profound..

Crafty Green Poet said...

effective and creepy

Amarettogirl said...

ooooh, I tend to like this sinister and macabre stuff - want to read more...what a piece of extraordinary horror in such few powerful words!! Great job!