Travelling Time
Body diced
Boned
And left
In acid bath
Boned
And left
In acid bath
~
A night’s work
Well done
~
Well done
~
Message sent -
Of delivered message
Of delivered message
~
That hand…
That face peeled…
~
And transaction
Completed -
~
Time to travel…
That face peeled…
~
And transaction
Completed -
~
Time to travel…
3 comments:
I had to read it 2-3 times..the first stanza is trademark 'you' . in spite of those intense emotions expressed .. every line seems to be suffused with a quiet, expectant hush .. and the last line.. profound..
effective and creepy
ooooh, I tend to like this sinister and macabre stuff - want to read more...what a piece of extraordinary horror in such few powerful words!! Great job!
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