Ish - First attempt, spent a fair while mulling over possibilities, and so far this is the best I can do, but I suspect it won't make much sense. I think i'll throw the ball back to you, and let you play with it :)
Inc, Well done mate! This one works for me. I see it as a kind of creativity 'totem' because of the shape. And read's (if I have it right) sort of like: Frustration. Emotional response. Proposition. Pause. (reflection?) Proposition. Solution. Emotional response. Maybe punctuation poems need a word title as you have given to make them work. I will have a go. :-)
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Ish - First attempt, spent a fair while mulling over possibilities, and so far this is the best I can do, but I suspect it won't make much sense. I think i'll throw the ball back to you, and let you play with it :)
Inc, Well done mate! This one works for me. I see it as a kind of creativity 'totem' because of the shape. And read's (if I have it right) sort of like:
Frustration.
Emotional response.
Proposition.
Pause. (reflection?)
Proposition.
Solution.
Emotional response.
Maybe punctuation poems need a word title as you have given to make them work. I will have a go. :-)
if by proposition you mean stop and think, then you got it spot on!
The more I looked at it the less it worked for me, i'm so glad you got the gist of it.
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