Tuesday, July 10, 2007

Distracted

Distracted

.

Abstracted from reality

Questioning my validity

Rational in obscurity

Dissipates in clarity

.

Bloodstains and powder-burns

On my pillow

11 comments:

aria said...

The first four lines .. are very very very powerful.

Inconsequential said...

thank you

ish said...

The final lines evoked for me the powerful, sometimes frightening clarity of awakening.

Inconsequential said...

:)

"it seemed like a good idea"

my past has many of those...
But no Bloodstains and powder-burns...well, that i can remember... :)

Pat Paulk said...

Bloodstains and powder burns are good things to be distracted from. One of those "ity" good poems!!

The Hermit of Wandering Thoughts said...

very good .. loved reading your blog
cheers
z

etain_lavena said...

i love anything when it has a blood connection. As always amazing in:)
Hope your good:)

A Shed said...

Send you a cauliflower.

A Shed said...

That's 'A' Shed.

A Shed...or was it 'C' said...

I tried to fit the cauliflower into a hole under a stone.

Pod said...

i wondered what powder bums were for a minute!
;0p