Distracted
Distracted
.
Abstracted from reality
Questioning my validity
Rational in obscurity
Dissipates in clarity
.
Bloodstains and powder-burns
On my pillow
Distracted
.
Abstracted from reality
Questioning my validity
Rational in obscurity
Dissipates in clarity
.
Bloodstains and powder-burns
On my pillow
11 comments:
The first four lines .. are very very very powerful.
thank you
The final lines evoked for me the powerful, sometimes frightening clarity of awakening.
:)
"it seemed like a good idea"
my past has many of those...
But no Bloodstains and powder-burns...well, that i can remember... :)
Bloodstains and powder burns are good things to be distracted from. One of those "ity" good poems!!
very good .. loved reading your blog
cheers
z
i love anything when it has a blood connection. As always amazing in:)
Hope your good:)
Send you a cauliflower.
That's 'A' Shed.
I tried to fit the cauliflower into a hole under a stone.
i wondered what powder bums were for a minute!
;0p
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