Experience Experiments
I am that marker pen
Dizzy scent quickly spent
I am that aerosol
Capped blast that didn’t last
I am that industrial glue
Bagged and tagged
On youths spotted face
I am that cigarette
I am that ale
That shot
That grape
I am that dubious weed
Giggling high and far
I am that powder white
Fast and bright
I am that powder brown
I am that crystal grown
I am needle and rope and spoon
And pipe and bag and knife
I am freedom trapping you
Dizzy scent quickly spent
I am that aerosol
Capped blast that didn’t last
I am that industrial glue
Bagged and tagged
On youths spotted face
I am that cigarette
I am that ale
That shot
That grape
I am that dubious weed
Giggling high and far
I am that powder white
Fast and bright
I am that powder brown
I am that crystal grown
I am needle and rope and spoon
And pipe and bag and knife
I am freedom trapping you
10 comments:
great read... sorta dark.. but i like it...
"I am freedom trapping you"
thats one fantastic oxymoron.. :)
Wow! Impressive writing -
bravo!!!! i love this...
should be on a poster in the hallways of the high schools!
I love how this builds from the innocuous to the heavy! So well written! And the rhyme doesn't overpower the meaning. Good job!
I loved the colors used here.
written with perspective.
I like the way it started and ended finally.
Refluxing Life
Oh wow. Oh WOW! OH WOW!!!! I loved this from start to finish!
Very, very nice
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