Adelaides Poem
the other poem Adelaide did a while back, can't remember if I posted it or not...
Puppies Are:-
Cute, soft and cuddly.
They chew, chew, chew on their toys.
They chase me on my scooter,
Barking and yapping.
Digging up plants in the garden,
Puppies do that all the time.
Puppies Are:-
Cute, soft and cuddly.
They chew, chew, chew on their toys.
They chase me on my scooter,
Barking and yapping.
Digging up plants in the garden,
Puppies do that all the time.
4 comments:
This is in the tradition of Robert Louis Stevenson and would be good in a book of poems for children, I think. Thanks for stopping by my blog and sharing your empathy.
Haiku time:
To find somebody.
You ask, and they say hello,
Then you bugger off.
Hi there. Sorry, I have been incredibly rude.
Speaking of incredible: Adelaide. They're not "good for a six-year-old", they're good.
brilliant! my nephew wrote some incredible poems when 13. i love the closing line. its perfect! how lucky you are
pod, my dad found a poem i wrote when i was twelve, i think i might put that up next :)
yes, i think i will :)
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